This week I had to do descriptive writing and is my second blog post. We had a choice of using a bicycle, a tube of lipstick, a pizza, a hedgehog, and a tennis racket. I chose to do a bicycle, a pizza, and a tennis racket to try and put some humour into it.
I was sitting in my cosy white bicycle when I started to put on my lipstick and eat my cheese and pepperoni pizza. My prickles were touching the wooden basket. It was like there was a huge bug biting me. It was really uncomfortable. I was thinking about the word tennis and what it could be. Could it be squishing ants?, could it be another type of pizza?. Whatever it was I like the sound of it. The next thing I know I hear screeching and screaming it was a deafening sound. There was a dark shadow looming over me screaming and crying and staring at me. It was creepy. The giant started to yell “ Mummy! Mummy! There is a hedgehog in my bicycle!”. More screaming more crying.
Tuesday, March 10, 2020
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ReplyDeleteAwesome!
ReplyDeleteHey Mabes, I really like the end part of your writing when you talk about a dark shadow looming over you, this is great language and really makes me imagine what is happening.
ReplyDeleteYou certainly do like to have humour in what you do, and this abstract piece of writing is no different! I look forward to reading your next post. :o)
great job Mabes hart what is your nidle name yahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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