Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, March 6, 2020
2/3/2020 Poetry Task The naughtiest thing did when I was younger
I have avoided the bath that was going to make me clean
and which you were probably angry to see the brown trail down the hall
forgive me it was my highlight of the day
so disgusting I loved it and so mucky my parents nearly exploded.
Have you ever done something so naughty your parents nearly exploded? Hi my name is Mabel and this is my doc about This is Just to say. When I did this I thought it was quite hard to remember what I did when I was younger. It was hard to remember because that was ages ago. And now there more things going on in my life.
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Hey Mabes, this is an interesting post, as I can't ever imagine you being naughty, LOL!
ReplyDeleteI also have some things that I did when I was little that was naughty...one time I kicked a cat down the stairs (☉_☉)
It would be easier to read your blog post if you spread out the writing and set out the the poem like the one you read.
Thanks for the feedback I will fix that up soon :).
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