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Wednesday, June 17, 2020

Sandy The Dragon!

Hi and welcome to my blog post. For writing we are doing creative writing. And for this lesson we did it on a baby dragon. I made up a story for my dragon on google slides.



When I did this I thought it was easy because I can make up and add anything I want. My sources are Google slides, my brain, and a picture. What would you call the dragon?

1 comment:

  1. Hey Mabel,
    I reckon that I would've called the Dragon Bobby.
    On the last sentence of your slide have a read and check that it makes sense because I spotted a bit that doesn't make sense.
    I think that you could change "And Sandy looks after them all of the baby dragons." to "And Sandy looks after them. All of the baby dragons."

    Keep Blogging!!

    Izzy ^_^

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