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Wednesday, June 17, 2020
Sandy The Dragon!
When I did this I thought it was easy because I can make up and add anything I want. My sources are Google slides, my brain, and a picture. What would you call the dragon?
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Hey Mabel,
ReplyDeleteI reckon that I would've called the Dragon Bobby.
On the last sentence of your slide have a read and check that it makes sense because I spotted a bit that doesn't make sense.
I think that you could change "And Sandy looks after them all of the baby dragons." to "And Sandy looks after them. All of the baby dragons."
Keep Blogging!!
Izzy ^_^